miércoles, 17 de diciembre de 2014

Some Thesis Statements...

1) Being successful at school does not ensure success in life, and, certainly, many times it is the other way around.

2) The increasing and obsessive importance of a healthy diet makes us forget that food is something to be enjoyed, and many times we are not even able to eat an ice-cream without feeling guilty.


3) Although the Internet and Social Networks have many advantages and make us feel “connected to the world”, they also have disadvantages and an excessive use of them can affect us in a negative way.


Outline of an Essay

    I. Travelling abroad is now easy and cheap thanks to Erasmus plus.

    II. All people should have the possibility to spend some time abroad at least once in their lives
    * See other cultures
    * Learn and respect the differences

    III. There used to be many programs with this aim that are now gathered in one single program called Erasmus plus
    * Studying abroad (Erasmus students)
    * Working abroad (Erasmus Placement, Internship)
    * Participating in Youth Exchanges or Training Courses (Intercultural exchanges)
    * EVS (European Voluntary Service: to develop a voluntary service in a foreign country).

    IV. If you are between 16-35 you can enjoy all the possibilities above
    * Erasmus plus covers almost 100% from all the costs (no need to spend a lot of money)
    * Meeting new friends from all over Europe
    * English as common language: possibility of practising and improving your English.
    V. Once we know all that, we can conclude that Erasmus plus offers just advantages for youngsters to improve themselves
    * Personal development
    * Professional development
    * Invest in your future


lunes, 1 de diciembre de 2014

Keep calm and quit smoking (Problem/Solution Essay)

Despite the constanst advertising and awareness campaigns against it, smoking is still one of the biggest problems for public health and the first cause of death in the world. The numbers speak for themselves: 140 people die in one day in Spain because of tobacco, the product that most diseases and deaths causes in the majority of the developed countries, and that could be prevented. Unfortunately, nobody seems to care about this situation. On television we just hear about deaths by traffic accidents or contagious diseases, when it is actually smoking the main cause of mortality in our society. Tobacco companies, on their behalf, represent a pressure for the governments and health authorities, creating thousands of victims every year, so it is difficult to find solutions.

Nevertheless, there are things we can do. One possible solution could be to restrict (even) more the number of places where smoking is allowed, but this remedy would be criticised, problematic and complicated to lay it down, since it is already forbidden almost everywhere, and the cure would be worse than the disease. Another remedy is to make stricter punishments for those who break the smoking ban laws, for instance, by imposing higher penalty fees. However, it would be very difficult to control everybody everywhere, and there would be still many people infringing this law.


A final solution can be to increase the taxes and price of tobacco, as when its price rises, not only is the number of people who smoke reduced but it also prevents many from starting cigarette consumption, especially at very young ages. This is probably the most effective way to dissuade smokers and restrain its use, and it is accepted normally quite well by everyone, even smokers, because, at the end, we all know how damaging smoking is.